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I read Guinness World Records 2004 for ----- minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was The guy with the Largest waist. A detail from the text that supports this is:Walter Hudson weighed 1,197 lb WOW. GDC 1/26/11



Why would the guy with the largest waist weigh so much???
-Ms. P Because to have a 5 foot belly he hast to weigh a LOT.


Thanks for proving your point! -Ms. P.

I read ben franklin and the magic squares for ----- minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was magic squares. A detail from the text that supports this is:the cover. GDC 1/27/11

Ok, but what about the magic squares- what is the point of them? Are they good, bad? Add more!
-Ms. P The Magic squares are GOOD



I read Ben Franklin And The Magic Squares for 16 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was Ben Invented sayings. A detail from the text is: A page that has a lot of his sayings like Early To Bed And Early To Rise Makes A Man Healthy, Wealthy And Wise.

Glenn, I remember talking about these saying yesterday! Great job with the main idea/supporting details. I'm going to challenge you: where were these sayings published? Do some research and I think you'll be really interested in the answer! Also, ADD A DATE! -MsP


I read Ben Franklin And The Magic Squares for 16 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was Ben Invented things. A detail from the text is: A page that sees Ben F invented flippers and the lightning rod.
And Ms.P he published them in Poor Richard's Almanack 1/8/11

Yes he did! I'm so glad you found out that fact. Would you like to try and get a copy of A Poor Richard's Almanack from the library? A couple things about your sentences above- first the word "stuff" isn't very formal. We don't usually use it when we write to a teacher. Also, you only mention one thing he invented. But, when you say "stuff" that usually means more than one... Oh, and a date???-Ms.P. OK Yes I would like a cope of The Poor Richard's Almanack.



I read Ben Franklin and the maGIC SQUARES for 16 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was Ben invented electricity . A detail from the text is: A page that sees Ben F proved that lightning was electricity from a kite and a key. 2/9/11

Hi Glenn! I think your main idea could be even shorter- like he invented electricity. I think you could add the lightening to the supporting details part, because that's "how" he invented electricity. What do you think? Also, could you underline the title? Thanks! -MsP


I read Ben Franklin and the maGIC SQUARES for 16 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was Ben invented Americas first library. A detail from the text is: A page that sees Ben F stared Americas first library. 2/10/11

Wow, that's some big font! Do you think I have problems seeing? I'm not that old Glenn! This main idea and supporting detail repeat each other. I'd like to help you rework this. Could you see me this morning with your book? Thanks! -MsP


I read Ben Franklin and the maGIC SQUARES for 16 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was Ben invented the first fire station. A detail from the text is: A page that sees Ben F stared first fire station . 2/14/11

Why did you repeat Franklin twice? Could you erase the incorrect one? Again (see my feedback above) you have the main idea and supporting detail repeating each other. See me this morning with that book. I think I can help! By the way, I feel like I'm shouting. -MsP


I read Ben Franklin and the maGIC SQUARES for 16 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was Ben invented the Magic squares. A detail from the text is: A page that sees Ben F that ben f invented the squares"magic squares are a square and you can make the same number. 2/15/11




I read The Biggest Riddle Book In The World for 17 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was Funny Riddles. A detail from the text is: A page that sees Why did the potato farmer use a steam roller? Because he wanted to grow mashed potatoes. 2/16/11


I read The World's weirdest critters for 15 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was weird animals. A detail from the text is: A page that sees a horse that does not have front legs and needed help getting around. 2/17/11


I read The World's weirdest critters for 15 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was big nests. A detail from the text is: A page that sees that a bald eagles nests can weigh as much as two tons!!!!!!! 2/22/11


I read The Biggest Riddle Book In The World for 17 minutes. In one section of the text, the main/central idea was Funny Riddles. A detail from the text is: A page that sees Why did the cow cross the street ? Because he wanted to go to the moo-vies. 2/22/11

3-26-11 GDC
George's Marvelous Medicine By Roald Dahl is a very good book to read. George is scared for his life. George's grandma is a mean witch.
His grandma said from now you must eat cabbage three times a day. Mountains of cabbage! And if it's got caterpillars in it, so much better!
His grandma says many mean things to George like boys who grow to fast become stupid and lazy. And your mom is as stupid as you are. George's grandma seems nice when George's parents are around but she is so so so mean.
He scared because his grandma told him that she was a witch and she is freaking him out. Cabbage would not taste like anything with out a few boiled caterpillars slugs too, his grandma said. We know how to make your nails drop off and teeth grow out of your fingers instead, she also said.
George's marvelous medicine is scary. I'm worred for George. I Hope he can come up with a potion to save his life.
I plan to keep reading this exciting book. I cant wait to see what happens next and I worked really hard on it.